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Write a letter to Ms Brown for advice om suitable course lacking time management

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Dear Ms Brown, I am writing to equire about the life skilla courses you advertised in Teen Magazine. I am a Grade 11 student. I have a lot of exercise and work but I lack time-magagement skills so sometimes I am impossible to finish them all. I can't schedule tasks effectively. And I don't know how to prioririse tasks. Could you advise me which of the courses i shouls take? I would also like to know how much the tuition fee will be if I enrol early. I hope that your answers to my questions will help me to make the righr decision about the course.
Dear Ms Brown, I am writing to
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equire
about the life
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skilla
courses you advertised in Teen Magazine. I am a Grade 11 student. I have
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a lot of
exercise and work
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but
I lack
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time-magagement
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skills
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so
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sometimes
I am impossible to finish them all.
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I
can't schedule tasks
effectively
. And I don't know how to
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prioririse
tasks. Could you advise me which of the courses i
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shouls
take? I would
also
like to know how much the tuition fee will be if I enrol early. I hope that your answers to my questions will
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help
me to
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make
the
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righr
decision about the course.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to Ms Brown for advice om suitable course lacking time management

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  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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