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Letter to a hotel manager where you left a bag

Letter to a hotel manager where you left a bag nX9b7

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the cafeteria setup in our prestigious college which I believe require few improvements. I would like to first start with the highlighting that it is a great place for students to spend their free time and have a chit-chat with fellow classmates and friends. The cafeteria has some great food options which are delicious and pocket-friendly. However, I would request you to have a look at the furniture available which seems to be very old and some of the chairs are broken which need repair. Also, due to limited staff, usually their is a delay in delivering orders. I have few suggestions on how to improve the services, if you are happy to consider. Firstly, all the table and chairs available should be repaired and replaced where possible. Secondly, some students might be interested in doing part-time work at the cafe to earn pocket money. Lastly, some motivational posters can be pasted on the walls to make it nice and more friendly place. I hope that you would consider the above suggestions. Yours faithfully, Sam

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the cafeteria setup in our prestigious college which I believe require few improvements.

I would like to first
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start
 with the highlighting that it is a great place for students to spend their free time and have a chit-chat with Consider using "classmates".classmates
fellow classmates
 and friends. The cafeteria has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 great food options which are delicious and pocket-friendly.

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very
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old
 and If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 chairs are broken
 which need repair. Also
, due to limited staff, usually
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their
 is a delay in delivering orders.

I have few suggestions on how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the services, if you are happy to consider. Firstly
, all the table and chairs available should be repaired
 and replaced where possible. Secondly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 students might be interested
 in doing part-time work at the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 to earn pocket money. Lastly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 motivational posters can be pasted
 on the walls to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it nice and more friendly place.

I hope that you would consider the above suggestions.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam