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Letter to a hotel manager where you left a bag

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the cafeteria setup in our prestigious college which I believe require few improvements. I would like to first start with the highlighting that it is a great place for students to spend their free time and have a chit-chat with fellow classmates and friends. The cafeteria has some great food options which are delicious and pocket-friendly. However, I would request you to have a look at the furniture available which seems to be very old and some of the chairs are broken which need repair. Also, due to limited staff, usually their is a delay in delivering orders. I have few suggestions on how to improve the services, if you are happy to consider. Firstly, all the table and chairs available should be repaired and replaced where possible. Secondly, some students might be interested in doing part-time work at the cafe to earn pocket money. Lastly, some motivational posters can be pasted on the walls to make it nice and more friendly place. I hope that you would consider the above suggestions. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the cafeteria setup in our prestigious college which I believe require few improvements.

I would like to
first
start
with the highlighting that it is a great place for students to spend their free time and have a chit-chat with
fellow classmates
and friends. The cafeteria has
some
great food options which are delicious and pocket-friendly.

However
, I would request you to have a look at the furniture available which seems to be
very
old
and
some of the
chairs
are broken
which need repair.
Also
, due to limited staff,
usually
their
is a delay in delivering orders.

I have few suggestions on how to
improve
the services, if you are happy to consider.
Firstly
, all the table and chairs available should
be repaired
and replaced where possible.
Secondly
,
some
students might
be interested
in doing part-time work at the
cafe
to earn pocket money.
Lastly
,
some
motivational posters can
be pasted
on the walls to
make
it nice and more friendly place.

I hope that you would consider the above suggestions.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter to a hotel manager where you left a bag

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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