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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect write letter to the editor of the magazine in your letter correct the information in the article

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect write letter to the editor of the magazine in your letter correct the information in the article KkYN
Dear sirToday, I read an article in your latest travel magazine which contain information about that the sabarmati ashram us the oldest than the adalaj vav. I am writing this letter to inform you this article is incorrect. The adalaj vav was conducted by Mahmud begada in 1411. Sabarmati ashram was established von 25 may, 1915. It is essential that any information published should be accurate. Your magazine is the one of the reputed magazine and you should publish correct information due to incorrect informations worst impact of city's reputation so it is crucial for the magazine to give correct informationI syggest that magazine can do is to publish a correction
Dear
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sirToday
, I read an article in your latest travel
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magazine
which contain
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information
about that the
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sabarmati
ashram us the
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oldest
than the
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adalaj
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vav
. I am writing this letter to inform you this article is incorrect. The
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adalaj
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vav
was conducted
by
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Mahmud
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begada
in 1411.
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Sabarmati
ashram
was established
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von
25
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "may 1915".
may, 1915
. It is essential that any
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information
published should be accurate. Your
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magazine
is the one of the reputed
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magazine
and you should publish correct
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information
due to incorrect
The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?
informations
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worst
impact of city's reputation
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so
it is crucial for the
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magazine
to give correct
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informationI
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syggest
that
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magazine
can do is to publish a
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correction

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect write letter to the editor of the magazine in your letter correct the information in the article

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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