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You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply

You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply Jlro6

Dear Mr Smith I am writing regarding the newly vacant position in assistant marketing. The marketing department suits me pretty well due to the fact, I have more than five years experienced in marketing field. The experience that l learn in various companies helps me to enhance my knowledge and skills also to be a better Manager in the future. Although many people apply for this position, may I know if they are still accepting applications letter, so that I can compile my previous certificate of employment. In addition I would like to know what is the final date of submission. It can not be denied that you are a really wise manager that I know, so I believe you can help me to grab this position. I am asking your opinion if this position is worth it to apply. Thank you for your help to this important matter. Kind Regards,

Dear Mr Smith

I am writing regarding the newly
 vacant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
position
 in assistant marketing.

The marketing department suits me pretty well due to the fact, I have more than five years experienced in marketing field. The experience that l learn in various This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me to enhance my knowledge and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
also
 to be a better Manager in the future.

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many
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people
 apply for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
position
, may I know if they are still
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so
 that I can compile my previous certificate of employment. In The comma is probably missing here: "addition, I".addition, I
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 would like to know what is the final date of submission.

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 that you are a really
 wise manager that I know, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I believe you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to grab this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
position
. I am asking your opinion if this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
position
 is worth it to apply.

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help
 to this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 matter.

Kind Regards, 