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letter regarding Microwave

letter regarding Microwave mWA8d

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a regular customer in your shop. I am writing to express my disappointment in the service I received last week. I went into your shop to purchase a microwave oven. I am familiar with your shop and know that you usually sell good quality merchandise and that you have friendly and efficient service. I waited for ten minutes to find a sales person to help me and when I asked questions about the selection and prices of the microwaves, the assistant (whose name was James) did not know any of the answers and seemed unwilling to find out. Eventually he went to answer the phone and did not come back to help me. I finally left the shop and purchased my microwave elsewhere. I am surprised that you would employ a person this unhelpful and uninformed. I would like to receive a written apology from your store, preferably from the sales assistant himself. I would like to be confident that I can have a positive shopping experience in your store next time. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir/Madam,

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shop
. I am writing to express my disappointment in the service I received last week.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 went into your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a microwave oven. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am familiar with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 and know that you usually
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good
 quality merchandise and that you have friendly and efficient service. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 waited for ten minutes to find a sales person to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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come
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help
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left
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shop
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 my microwave elsewhere.

I am surprised
 that you would employ a person this unhelpful and uninformed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to receive a written apology from your store, preferably
 from the sales assistant himself.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to be confident that I can have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 shopping experience in your store next
 time. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully
, 