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You are in a bad situation,you can not solve your problem without advice.ask advice from your best relationship.

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Dear Abdusalom Makamov. I have got a problem and l need your advice about this situation. I wonder if you could help me with the problem. My daughter is 7years old and it is time her to go to school this year. S of speaking Russian. That is why, I decided to enroll my daughter's document in russian school. However my husband does not agree with my decision. He eager desires that our child will have to get knowledge at national Uzbek school. In addition he guesses that growing up among national atmosphere is essential in her future life. Cause to my husband stubbornness, I have difficulties for registering our important documents to school. In my perspective, you can give us the best advice to settle our position as like as before. I look forward to hearing your advice as soon as possible. With faithfully Shahobova Sitora
Dear
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Abdusalom
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Makamov
. I have
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got
a problem and l need your advice about this situation. I wonder if you could
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help
me with the problem. My daughter is 7years
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old
and it is time her to go to
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school
this year. S of speaking Russian.
That is
why, I decided to enroll my daughter's document in
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russian
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school
.
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However
my husband does not
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agree
with my decision.
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He
eager desires that our child will
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have to
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get
knowledge at national Uzbek
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school
. In
The comma is probably missing here: "addition, he".
addition he
guesses that growing up among national atmosphere is essential in her future life. Cause to my husband stubbornness, I have difficulties for registering our
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important
documents to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. In my perspective, you can give us the best advice to settle our position as like as
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before
. I look forward to hearing your advice as
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soon
as possible. With
faithfully
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Shahobova
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Sitora

IELTS letter You are in a bad situation, you can not solve your problem without advice. ask advice from your best relationship.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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