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You are in a bad situation,you can not solve your problem without advice.ask advice from your best relationship.

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Dear Abdusalom Makamov. I have got a problem and l need your advice about this situation. I wonder if you could help me with the problem. My daughter is 7years old and it is time her to go to school this year. S of speaking Russian. That is why, I decided to enroll my daughter's document in russian school. However my husband does not agree with my decision. He eager desires that our child will have to get knowledge at national Uzbek school. In addition he guesses that growing up among national atmosphere is essential in her future life. Cause to my husband stubbornness, I have difficulties for registering our important documents to school. In my perspective, you can give us the best advice to settle our position as like as before. I look forward to hearing your advice as soon as possible. With faithfully Shahobova Sitora
Dear
Abdusalom
Makamov
. I have
got
a problem and l need your advice about this situation. I wonder if you could
help
me with the problem. My daughter is 7years
old
and it is time her to go to
school
this year. S of speaking Russian.
That is
why, I decided to enroll my daughter's document in
russian
school
.
However
my husband does not
agree
with my decision.
He
eager desires that our child will
have to
get
knowledge at national Uzbek
school
. In
addition he
guesses that growing up among national atmosphere is essential in her future life. Cause to my husband stubbornness, I have difficulties for registering our
important
documents to
school
. In my perspective, you can give us the best advice to settle our position as like as
before
. I look forward to hearing your advice as
soon
as possible. With
faithfully
Shahobova
Sitora
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IELTS letter You are in a bad situation, you can not solve your problem without advice. ask advice from your best relationship.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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