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You are having some problems in the accommodation that you rent. Write a letter to the manager of the rental agency.

You are having some problems in the accommodation that you rent. Write a letter to the manager of the rental agency. Kn9r1

To the manager, I am currently renting a flat through your agency. The address is house-6, road-3, sector -6, Uttara, Dhaka. I took the flat on December last year. Now I am facing few problems, that should be solve quickly. As you know now, its raining season. Almost everyday got raining. The windows of north side, its working properly. Whenever got heavy rain, there's always got leakage water in my bed room. The window is not properly set. Need to repair glass as soon as possible. Besides, there got problem with Roof. As I am living on 12th floor, the top of this building. My flat become very hot in before afternoon. After Sunset also I can feel very hot inside my home. I think an Air conditioner can solve this problem. I would be grateful to you if can arrange, window repair service and And install an Air conditioner. We will also need an electrician to check our electric devices and connection. Please let me know when we can expect them. Regards Obayda

To the manager, I am currently
 renting a flat through your agency. The address is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
-6, road-3, sector -6, Possible spelling mistake found.OttawaUltraUtterTiaraUttersTara
Uttara
, Dhaka. I took the flat on December last year. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I am facing few problems, that should be Consider using the past participle "solved"?solved
solve
quickly
. As you know This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, its raining season. Almost 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
 raining. The windows of north side, its working properly
. Whenever You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
 heavy rain, there's always You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
 leakage water in my This word is normally spelled as one.bedroom
bed room
. The window is not properly
 set. Need to repair glass as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Besides
, there You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
 problem with Roof. As I am living on 12th floor, the top of this building. My flat become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 hot in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 afternoon. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 Sunset also
 I can feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 hot inside my home. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 an Air conditioner can solve this problem. I would be grateful to you if can arrange, window repair service Possible typo: you repeated a wordand
and And
 install an Air conditioner. We will also
 need an electrician to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 our electric devices and connection. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know when we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 them. Regards Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphObayda.Obayda!Obayda?Obayda:Obayda,Obayda;
Obayda