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Write a letter to the manager of the museum , why you visited the museum,Describe the problems you faced, suggest what can be done to avoid these problems.

Write a letter to the manager of the museum, why you visited the museum, Describe the problems you faced, suggest what can be done to avoid these problems. JlyN5

Dear sir, My name is Priyanka Chauhan. I visited to your museum last week with my kit and kin. The reason behind my visit is that I am very fond of watching various historical artefacts, statues and so on. Moreover, I have deep interest to know various important information about the past. My grandfather was a freedom fighter and he told me various things about his struggle in the freedom. Anyway, everything was great at your Museum, my father faced many problems in moving around you are museum as he has injury in his one leg and he found it difficult to move from one place to another. Apart from this, there was a problem of cleanliness as there was a dust all over the place. I strongly think that you should rectify both the problems as earlier as possible. In order to resolve this issue, you can provide a wheelchair which will be beneficial for the older people as well as pay more attention towards tidiness. Yours faithfully, Priyanka Chauhan

Dear sir,

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very
 fond of watching various historical Possible spelling mistake. 'artefacts' is British English.artifacts
artefacts
, statues and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. Moreover
, I have deep interest to know various This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 information about the past. My grandfather was a freedom Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fighter, and
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told
 me various things about his struggle in the freedom.

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many
 problems in moving around you are museum as he has injury in his one Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).leg, and
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move
 from one place to another. Apart from this, there was a problem of cleanliness as there was a dust all over the place.

I strongly
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think
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 possible. In order to resolve this issue, you can provide a wheelchair which will be beneficial for the older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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as well
 as pay more attention towards tidiness.

Yours faithfully
, Priyanka Chauhan