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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. Write at least 150 words.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. 7Mdb
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to you with regards a digital marketing course. It is an online course that is been offered free of charge by the chamber of commerce. It is been done to help businesses take advantage of the new media available to market themselves. I thought that this would be a good move for us especially with how the company has been hit by the pandemic and people having reduced their shopping in-person. It would be an opportunity for us to learn how to grow and manage our online presence and hopefully gain new sales that way. I was hoping that you could excuse me from my regular duties for the next two days to allow me participate in the course. In addition to that, I would like to access the course using the company computer and using the work internet connection. Looking forward to your favourable consideration of this request. Kind regards, Tommy Black
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to you with regards a digital marketing course.

It is an online course that
is been
offered free of charge by the chamber of commerce. It
is been
done to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
businesses take advantage of the new media available to market themselves.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that this would be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
for us
especially
with how the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has
been hit
by the pandemic and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
their shopping in-person. It would be an opportunity for us to learn how to grow and manage our online presence and
hopefully
gain new sales that way.

I was hoping that you could excuse me from my regular duties for the
next
two days to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me
Please check whether 'to' is missing here (to allow to do something).
participate
in the course.
In addition
to that, I would like to access the course using the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
computer and using the work internet connection.

Looking forward to your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.
favourable
consideration of this request.

Kind regards,

Tommy Black

IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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158 words
6.0
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