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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan Write at least 150 words.

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan jJx8
My name is John Smith – a resident of Coquitlam for five years. My family moved here due to its affordability, and proximity to the city. We also enjoy several small parks in which our sons and their friends play. One of these parks is Lafarge Park, on Guilford Street. It is not large, but it is well-used, clean, and safe. Recently, I learnt that Coquitlam Council has decided to sell this public amenity for development. The land has already been reasoned residential, so I assume as many dwellings as possible – perhaps even twenty apartments – could be built here. While I am not a lawyer, and do not know by which legal process this land could be sold, as a resident, I was neither informed nor consulted about it. All my neighbors say the same thing. We have petitioned the council, and I hope this letter reaches a wider public. Our website, SaveLafargePark. com lists a number of protest activities in which we hope your readers may join us. Too few green and tranquil public spaces remain in this overdeveloped city. Save Lafarge Park before it is be too late. John Smith
My name is John Smith
a resident of
Coquitlam
for five years. My family
moved
here due to

its affordability, and proximity to the city. We
also
enjoy several
small
parks
in which our sons

and their friends play. One of these
parks
is
Lafarge
Park
, on Guilford Street. It is not large,
but


it is well-
used
, clean, and safe.

Recently, I
learnt
that
Coquitlam
Council has decided to sell this public amenity for

development. The land has already
been reasoned
residential,
so
I assume as
many
dwellings as

possible
perhaps even twenty apartments
could
be built
here.

While I am not a lawyer, and do not know by which legal process this land could
be sold
, as a

resident, I was neither informed nor consulted about it. All my neighbors say the same thing. We

have petitioned the council, and I hope this letter reaches a wider public.

Our website,
SaveLafargePark
.
com
lists a number of protest activities in which we hope your

readers may
join
us. Too few green and tranquil public spaces remain in this overdeveloped city.

Save
Lafarge
Park
before
it is
be
too late.

John Smith
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IELTS letter There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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  American English
6 paragraphs
193 words
5.5
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