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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ko5W

Dear Ben, I’m am writing a letter to you I would like to invite you this coming Friday March 24. I’m having a small celebration for my daughter’s special day. You can bring your family also with you. The timing is 3: 00 pm in the afternoon located at delta street near to my house. Just go straight ahead and you will see small tent in the corner. Hope you can come and it will be more fun if you bring your kids with you. Not only will it be a fun gathering, but we’ll all able to catch up and spend some time together.

Dear Ben, Did you mean "I am"?I am
I’m am
 writing a letter to Consider adding a comma here.you,
you
 I would like to invite you this coming Commas set off the month in a weekday-month-day date: "Friday,".Friday,
Friday
 March 24. I’m having a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 celebration for my daughter’s special day. You can bring your family also
 with you. The timing is 3: 00 This is redundant. Consider using "pm".pm
pm in the afternoon
 located at delta street near to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 go straight ahead and you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 tent in the corner. Hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and it will be more fun if you bring your kids with you. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 will it be a fun gathering, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we’ll all able to catch up and spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time together. 

IELTS letter You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

105 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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