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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ko5W
Dear Ben, I’m am writing a letter to you I would like to invite you this coming Friday March 24. I’m having a small celebration for my daughter’s special day. You can bring your family also with you. The timing is 3: 00 pm in the afternoon located at delta street near to my house. Just go straight ahead and you will see small tent in the corner. Hope you can come and it will be more fun if you bring your kids with you. Not only will it be a fun gathering, but we’ll all able to catch up and spend some time together.
Dear Ben,
Did you mean "I am"?
I’m am
writing a letter to
Consider adding a comma here.
you
I would like to invite you this coming
Commas set off the month in a weekday-month-day date: "Friday,".
Friday
March 24. I’m having a
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small
celebration for my daughter’s special day. You can bring your family
also
with you. The timing is 3: 00
This is redundant. Consider using "pm".
pm in the afternoon
located at delta street near to my
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house
.
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Just
go straight ahead and you will
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see
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small
tent in the corner. Hope you can
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come
and it will be more fun if you bring your kids with you. Not
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only
will it be a fun gathering,
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but
we’ll all able to catch up and spend
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some
time together.
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IELTS letter You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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