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You are graduating on the 15th of next month . A very important event of my life a ceremony will followed by lunch, your aunt promised to come. - Remind your aunt about Graduation -

You are graduating on the 15th of next month. A very important event of my life a ceremony will followed by lunch, your aunt promised to come. - Remind your aunt about Graduation - 6xb7K
Dear Aunty, I am writing this letter to give a reminder about the event of my graduation. As I am waiting for this day since long. you are the one who take care of me from my childhood. I would be happy if you come and be part of special day i. e my graduation ceremony. I know, you were also eagerly waiting to for this day. you had promised me to be part of it. This program will be of 1 hour 30 minutes, which will start at sharp 11. 00 am in presence of trustees of college. First 30 minutes of the program will be a formal introduction of guest & welcoming guests. The event followed by award to gold medalist and degree certificate distribution lastly lunch at the end of the event. Thank you Jagdish
Dear Aunty,

I am writing this letter to give a reminder about the
event
of my graduation.

As I am waiting for this day since long.
you
are the one who take care of me from my childhood. I would be happy if you
come
and be part of special day i. e my graduation ceremony. I know, you were
also
eagerly
waiting to for this day.
you
had promised me to be part of it.

This program will be of 1 hour 30 minutes, which will
start
at sharp 11. 00 am in presence of trustees of college.
First
30 minutes of the program will be a formal introduction of guest & welcoming guests. The
event
followed by award to gold medalist and degree certificate distribution
lastly
lunch at the
end
of the
event
.

Thank you
Jagdish
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IELTS letter You are graduating on the 15th of next month. A very important event of my life a ceremony will followed by lunch, your aunt promised to come. - Remind your aunt about Graduation -

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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