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letter to manger. Asking help to deliver some lost items.

letter to manger. Asking help to deliver some lost items. wBNWY
Dear Mr. Sam, I am writing this letter to share a problem with you and I need your help in this. I stayed in your hotel last week. I stayed from 10th May to 12th May. My room number was 503. I stayed in your hotel for some official purposes. The problem is that I forgot my trousers and a belt in the almirah of the room. In the pocket of this trousers, there is a diary in which I write my official contacts. These contacts are vital for me. I urgently need these. I need your help with this. I would really appreciate if you deliver these on my address. I will pay all the delivery charges. My address is 593, street number 8, Field Gunj, Ludhiana, Punjab. My contact number is 9501329761. Thanks in advance. With regards, Priya.
Dear Mr. Sam,

I am writing this letter to share a problem with you and I need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in this. I stayed in your hotel last week.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
stayed from 10th May to 12th May. My room number was 503. I stayed in your hotel for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
official purposes.

The problem is that I forgot my trousers and a belt in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
almirah
of the room. In the pocket of
Did you mean "these"?
this
trousers, there is a diary in which I write my official contacts. These contacts are vital for me. I
urgently
need these.

I need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with this.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
really
appreciate if you deliver these on my address.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will pay all the delivery charges. My address is 593, street number 8, Field
Possible spelling mistake found.
Gunj
, Ludhiana, Punjab. My contact number is 9501329761.

Thanks in advance.

With regards, Priya.

IELTS letter letter to manger. Asking help to deliver some lost items.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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