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You are going to work at a school .You should write an application letter for an employer

You are going to work at a school. You should write an application letter for an employer ORjly
I am writing to apply for the position of English teacher at your specialized school which was advertised in Professional teacher's Chanel on social media. With regard to education, I graduated from University of Termiz with a degree in german. However, After for a while, I have studied at the english retraining course for four months in the World Languages University of Tashkent. Since that period, I have been working as an english teacher. Further, after I returned from maternity leave, I was offered a part time job, but I want to have a full time profession. Nevertheless, I have been working there for 2 months in case I couldn't find another one. Moreover, I can speak fluently english, german and some russian. And I hold two certificates in Cefr for salary bonus and 7th level in Ielts. In addition, I have ten years of teaching experience and approach my occupation diligently. Thus, I would say that i have many positive sides, for instance, I'm very meticulous with my work, well organized, full of energy, creative thinker and keep pupils' interested in the lesson. So, I have enclosed a copy of my CV. I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to youYours faithfully, Ann Brown.
I am writing to apply for the position of English teacher at your specialized school which
was advertised
in Professional teacher's Chanel on social media. With regard to education, I graduated from University of
Termiz
with a degree in
german
.
However
, After for a while, I have studied at the
english
retraining course for four months in the World Languages University of Tashkent. Since that period, I have been working as an
english
teacher.
Further
, after I returned from maternity
leave
, I
was offered
a
part time
job,
but
I want to have a full time profession.
Nevertheless
, I have been working there for 2 months in case I couldn't find another one.
Moreover
, I can speak
fluently
english
,
german
and
some
russian
. And I hold two certificates in
Cefr
for salary bonus and 7th level in
Ielts
.
In addition
, I have ten years of teaching experience and approach my occupation
diligently
.
Thus
, I would say that
i
have
many
positive
sides,
for instance
, I'm
very
meticulous with my work, well organized, full of energy, creative thinker and
keep
pupils' interested in the lesson.
So
, I have enclosed a copy of my CV. I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to
youYours
faithfully
, Ann Brown.
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IELTS letter You are going to work at a school. You should write an application letter for an employer

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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