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Dear Dilshod I'm writing this letter to explain

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Dear Dilshod I am writing this letter to explain my problem which recently I bought a dish from your shops, then it is broke. Last week I bought a small piece of dish for my kitchen and I got warranty for that, when I current it to my home suddenly when I walking on the street I heared something is broke, then, I opened my bag, unfortunately, my dish is broke and I think it was changed because that piece like old and not that piece which I saw in first time. I call your shop several times but no answer from your shop. I would be grateful if youbreturn my money or changed this piece. Faithfully
Dear
Dilshod
I am writing this letter to
explain
my problem which recently I
bought
a dish from your shops, then it is broke. Last week I
bought
a
small
piece
of dish for my kitchen and I
got
warranty for that, when I
current
it to my home
suddenly
when
I walking
on the street I
heared
something is broke, then, I opened my bag, unfortunately, my dish is broke and I
think
it was
changed
because
that
piece
like
old
and not that
piece
which I
saw
in
first
time. I call your shop several times
but
no answer from your shop. I would be grateful if
youbreturn
my money or
changed
this
piece
.
Faithfully
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IELTS letter Dear Dilshod I'm writing this letter to explain

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  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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