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Beauty of Vietnam

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Friday, November 12th, 2021 Dear Long time no see. How are you? I heard you're on a vacation after a long day at work. If you want to travel somewhere, I suggest visiting my country. And you should know some beauties of Vietnam before coming here to avoid being surprised. First, you should come to Hanoi where you can try famous local food and explore the culture of our capital city. From a long time ago, Hanoi was famous for its thirty-six streets… Each street is a craft village, with typical goods. Coming to Hanoi, we can not ignore the tourist attractions such as Bat Trang pottery village, the Temple of Literature, one pillar pagoda, . . . And there is a place you must go when traveling to Hanoi is Sword Lake, which is only for walking along with delicious dishes such as Trang Tien ice cream, . . . Hanoi is famous for many delicious dishes like Pho, Banh Mi, Bun Cha, . . . Second, If you want to go see the majestic natural scenery, Ha Long is a great idea. Ha Long Bay is one of the seven natural wonders in the world. It is located in Ha Long city, Quang Ninh province in the north of Vietnam. It is about 200 kilometers from Hanoi to Ha Long city. The ideal season to visit Ha Long Bay is summer when the weather is warm and sunny. There are lots of beautiful caves and islands in Ha Long, so you must take a boat trip and go sightseeing. Moreover, the seafood is fresh and delicious, you must try it at least once. If you come to Vietnam for traveling, I will look forward to your letter about your feelings about Vietnam. Your friend Bach

Friday, November 12th, 2021

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