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you are due to move into a rented apartment next month

you are due to move into a rented apartment next month 8dpLB

Dear James, I am Smith, and I am writing this letter to inform you on behalf the next month I will move to another apartment because your flat had some problems. The issue had a door broken a few months ago, and the walls painting would be highly damaged. I have informed you more times but you are not taken any action, so I will desire to move on next month. Last one year has lived in your apartment in James Street, at the rudimentary period as good conditions you flat but after six months all doors were broken and locker issues. The walls painting are highly damaged. The problems are dangerous every day. I have informed you more times, but you have not taken a decision. If you have not to repair or replace doors and furnished paintings immediately. If you do not take any decision within one week and I will move to the rented apartment. So I need to refund the amount without cutting down any additional charges. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Smith.

Dear James,

I am Smith, and I am writing this letter to inform you on behalf the next
 month I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to another apartment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 your flat had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems. The issue had a door broken a few months ago, and the walls painting would be highly
 damaged. I have informed you more times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you are not taken any action, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will desire to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 on next
 month.

Last one year has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in your apartment in James Street, at the rudimentary period as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 conditions you flat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after six months all doors were broken
 and locker issues. The walls painting are highly
 damaged. The problems are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 every day. I have informed you more times, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you have not taken a decision.

If you have not to repair or replace doors and furnished paintings immediately. If you do not take any decision within one week and I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to the rented apartment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I need to refund the amount without cutting down any additional charges.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Smith. 