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you are due to move into a rented apartment next month

you are due to move into a rented apartment next month 8dpLB
Dear James, I am Smith, and I am writing this letter to inform you on behalf the next month I will move to another apartment because your flat had some problems. The issue had a door broken a few months ago, and the walls painting would be highly damaged. I have informed you more times but you are not taken any action, so I will desire to move on next month. Last one year has lived in your apartment in James Street, at the rudimentary period as good conditions you flat but after six months all doors were broken and locker issues. The walls painting are highly damaged. The problems are dangerous every day. I have informed you more times, but you have not taken a decision. If you have not to repair or replace doors and furnished paintings immediately. If you do not take any decision within one week and I will move to the rented apartment. So I need to refund the amount without cutting down any additional charges. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Smith.
Dear James,

I am Smith, and I am writing this letter to inform you on behalf the
next
month I will
move
to another apartment
because
your flat had
some
problems. The issue had a door broken a few months ago, and the walls painting would be
highly
damaged. I have informed you more times
but
you are not taken any action,
so
I will desire to
move
on
next
month.

Last one year has
lived
in your apartment in James Street, at the rudimentary period as
good
conditions you flat
but
after six months all doors
were broken
and locker issues. The walls painting are
highly
damaged. The problems are
dangerous
every day. I have informed you more times,
but
you have not taken a decision.

If you have not to repair or replace doors and furnished paintings immediately. If you do not take any decision within one week and I will
move
to the rented apartment.
So
I need to refund the amount without cutting down any additional charges.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Smith.
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IELTS letter you are due to move into a rented apartment next month

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  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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