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Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter

Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter LbX3K
Dear Mr Walee, I have recently attended a conference in Dubai and I believe I have accumulated some valuable information in call forwarding technology, roaming and data transfer in the telecom industry. I am wondering if you would permit me to give a presentation to our team in order to present them with some insights into what the recent telecom world looks like. My plan for the presentation session is to cover two important topics which were reported at the conference I attended. I am thinking to get the guys gathered in the meeting room on Monday morning, at 9: 00 am. With your permission, I will do it in two separate sessions to present topics - "Modern challenges facing mobile telecom in international call forwarding, roaming and data sterilization" and "New emerging services". I think the presentation will last for two hours, an hour for each module. I have attached the materials which will be narrated in the session. Your approval is kindly requested for the content of the presentation and for the member of the team to attend it. My suggestion is to involve the whole team as it is extremely important related to our work environment and job performance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding this. Yours sincerely, Alwhab Mansur
Dear Mr
Walee
,

I have recently attended a conference in Dubai and I believe I have accumulated
some
valuable information in call forwarding technology, roaming and data transfer in the telecom industry. I am wondering if you would permit me to give a
presentation
to our team in order to present them with
some
insights into what the recent telecom world looks like.

My plan for the
presentation
session is to cover two
important
topics which
were reported
at the conference I attended. I am thinking to
get
the guys gathered in the meeting room on Monday morning, at 9: 00 am. With your permission, I will do it in two separate sessions to present topics
-
"
Modern challenges facing mobile telecom in international call forwarding, roaming and data sterilization
"
and
"
New emerging services
"
. I
think
the
presentation
will last for two hours, an hour for each module.

I have attached the materials which will
be narrated
in the session. Your approval is kindly requested for the content of the
presentation
and for the member of the team to attend it. My suggestion is to involve the whole team as it is
extremely
important
related to our work environment and job performance.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
regarding this.

Yours
sincerely
,

Alwhab
Mansur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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