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Write a Letter to The Manager of A Cinema About a Jacket You Have Left

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding my jacket which I accidentally left in your cinema hall where I paid for my family yesterday, on 11. 08. 201. It is a yellow jacket of a renowned brand “Louis Vuitton” with zippers on each side. The jacket is in excellent condition because I wore it for the first time yesterday. I got it as a present from my mother on the occasion of my birthday last week; hence it holds an emotional value to me. I visited the movie theatre yesterday to watch the evening show of the movie “Jai Hind” from 7 pm -10 pm. I have reserved 4 seats in advance for this show with seat numbers from A10-A14 which is at the top row of the hall and therefore convenient to find. I would really appreciate it if you could check with your staff if they found any jacket with the above-mentioned specifications while cleaning the room post-show. Kindly send me the confirmation on my email Shivani01@gmail. com, and I will come and collect the same from the venue. Awaiting your response. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding my
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jacket
which I
accidentally
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left
in your cinema hall where I paid for my family yesterday, on 11. 08. 201.

It is a yellow
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jacket
of a renowned brand “Louis Vuitton” with zippers on each side. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
is in excellent condition
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because
I wore it for the
first
time yesterday. I
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got
it as a present from my mother on the occasion of my birthday last week;
hence
it holds an emotional value to me.

I visited the movie
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theatre
yesterday to
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watch
the evening
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show
of the movie “
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Jai
Hind” from 7 pm -10 pm.
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I
have reserved 4 seats in advance for this
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show
with seat numbers from A10-A14 which is at the top row of the hall and
therefore
convenient to find.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
really
appreciate it if you could
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check
with your staff if they found any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
with the above-mentioned specifications while cleaning the room post-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
. Kindly
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send
me the confirmation on my email Shivani01@gmail.
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com
, and I will
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come
and collect the same from the venue.

Awaiting your response.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write a Letter to The Manager of A Cinema About a Jacket You Have Left

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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