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2. Hi, how are you doing? I’m really enjoying my piano lesson which I have on evenings every week. The teacher is friendly and lovely. You know, playing the piano has always been one of my dreams since I was a child. Unfortunately, I have a

2. Hi, how are you doing? I’m really enjoying my piano lesson which I have on evenings every week. The teacher is friendly and lovely. You know, playing the piano has always been one of my dreams since I was a child. Unfortunately, I have a gWjqD
Dear Jenny I’m sorry I haven’t written for such a long time. I’m writing to apologies for missing your appointment but I’m afraid I will have a last critical exam in weekend. I hope you don’t mind me asking but could you have me know other available time? I’d be very grateful if you could make an new appointment with me. Maybe you could give me an appointment on my birthday? Because I’m sure you will enjoy my birthday party. If you like others activities, we can catch a famous film at the cinema and go around city. Anyway I must go and get on with my work. Hope to hear from you soon’ Loves Dan
Dear Jenny

I’m sorry I haven’t written for such a long time. I’m writing
Did you mean "to apologize" (American English) or "to apologise" (British English)?
to apologies
for missing your appointment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I’m afraid I will have a last critical exam in weekend. I hope you don’t mind me asking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
could you have me know other available time?
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’d be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
grateful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
new appointment with me. Maybe you could give me an appointment on my birthday?
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I’m sure you will enjoy my birthday party. If you like others activities, we can catch a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
film at the cinema and go around city.

Anyway I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
go and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
on with my work. Hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
’

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Loves


Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Dan

IELTS letter 2. Hi, how are you doing? I’m really enjoying my piano lesson which I have on evenings every week. The teacher is friendly and lovely. You know, playing the piano has always been one of my dreams since I was a child. Unfortunately, I have a

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
115 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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