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Dear Shopee team, I am applying for the Shopee Vietnam Global Leaders Program (2022) as I had noticed and waited on the Shopee Careers fanpage. I am a positive, self-motivated and a quick learning person who believes that always being ready and adaptive are the keys to develop in a constantly changing market. I am applying for this opportunity because, having researched on the job description and myself, I believe the Shopee working environment is energetic and dynamic, and my leadership experiences from my past curricular activities will be a great background for me to match the requirements of the team. To briefly introduce more about myself, my name is Nguyen Quang Minh, currently finishing my 4th year at National Economics University in Ha Noi. I have read about 4 positions in the Shopee team and I am really eager to develop myself to understand my role and the operations to contribute appropriately for the team. Thus, I can work hard as part of the team to achieve the team goals and projects. In addition, I have a desire to increase the efficiency of a business and its operations under its rules and procedures, so I believe that everything should be lean and clear enough to accomplish the highest priority task. Besides, I will take on all tasks, regardless of their complexity. I fully appreciate this opportunity for me and I really expect to work and strive with a fast-growing and challenging team at Shopee. I would also very much appreciate to be the next GLP Associate, as well as a part of the team. Yours faithfully, Nguyen Quang Minh.
Dear
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team,

I am applying for the
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Shopee
Vietnam Global Leaders Program (2022) as I had noticed and waited on the
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Shopee
Careers
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fanpage
.

I am a
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positive
, self-motivated and a quick learning person who believes that always being ready and adaptive are the keys to develop in a
constantly
changing market.
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I
am applying for this opportunity
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because
, having researched on the job description and
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myself
, I believe the
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Shopee
working environment is energetic and dynamic, and my leadership experiences from my past curricular activities will be a great background for me to match the requirements of the team.

To
briefly
introduce more about myself, my name is Nguyen
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Quang
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Minh
,
currently
finishing my 4th year at National Economics University in Ha
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Noi
. I have read about 4 positions in the
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Shopee
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team and
I am
really
eager to develop myself to understand my role and the operations to contribute
appropriately
for the
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team
.
Thus
, I can work
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hard
as part of the
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team
to achieve the
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team
goals and projects.
In addition
, I have a desire to increase the efficiency of a business and its operations under its
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rules
and procedures,
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so
I believe that everything should be lean and
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clear
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enough
to accomplish the highest priority task.
Besides
, I will take on all tasks, regardless of their complexity.

I
fully
appreciate this opportunity for me and I
really
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expect
to work and strive with a
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fast
-growing and challenging
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team
at
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. I would
also
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very
much
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appreciate to be
the
next
GLP Associate,
as well
as a part of the team.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nguyen
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Quang
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Minh
.
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