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write a letter to an accommodation officer in foreign university in which you have taken admission.

write a letter to an accommodation officer in foreign university in which you have taken admission. PRnNd
Dear sir, My name is Brijeta Ghrvariya and I have enrolled myself in your classes Business Management. However, I am writing this letter to request you for accommodation while reaching there for class. My classes start on 13 May, but I will be there on 1 May. I have been contacting with senior students they are very kind to me. Whereas, they will pick me up from the airport after landing and also accommodate me for 1-2 days. I heard that residence of University has been getting full that's why I am writing this letter to book in advance. It would be great if you give me a single room if possible but I also can share it with other students who belong to india. while sharing with them feel me at home. It would be very helpful if you provide a room near my class. Hoping for a prompt response regarding this matter. Yours faithfully, Brijeta Ghevariya
Dear sir,

My name is
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Brijeta
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Ghrvariya
and I have enrolled myself in your classes Business Management.
However
, I am writing this letter to request you for accommodation while reaching there for
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class
.

My classes
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start
on 13 May,
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but
I will be there on 1 May. I have been contacting with senior students they are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
kind to me. Whereas, they will pick me up from the airport after landing and
also
accommodate me for 1-2 days. I heard that residence of University has been getting full that's why I am writing this letter to book in advance.

It would be great if you give me a single room if possible
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but
I
also
can share it with other students who belong to
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india
.
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while
sharing with them feel me at home. It would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
helpful if you provide a room near my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

Hoping for a prompt response regarding this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Brijeta
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Ghevariya
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IELTS letter write a letter to an accommodation officer in foreign university in which you have taken admission.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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