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Write a letter to a friend, telling him or her about a special meal you had recently.

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Dear my friend, Last week my family went out for a meal in celebration of my cousin's admission to university. We went to Sauna Hotpot which is a pretty small place around the corner of the street. They have a large variety of amazing food to choose from. My parents picked sea food while my cousins and I picked chicken. Everyone ate and congratulated my cousin on his admission. We were in love with the food. It was a very delicate meal by the end of the day. If you are interested, you should really give it a try. With love Lan Chi
Dear my friend, Last week my family went out for a meal in celebration of my cousin's admission to university. We went to Sauna Hotpot which is a pretty
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place around the corner of the street. They have a large variety of amazing food to choose from. My parents picked sea food while my cousins and I picked chicken. Everyone ate and congratulated my cousin on his admission. We were in
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love
with the food. It was a
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delicate meal by the
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of the day. If you
are interested
, you should
really
give it a try.

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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend, telling him or her about a special meal you had recently.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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