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Dear Ly I received your letter last week, but I was too busy studying, so I couldn't reply right away. How's it going? I hope all’s well with you. So it's been 3 months since the pandemic returned, and I can't go home. I am so homesick and miss you so much. Is the epidemic situation at home under control? What do people do in the field this season? Everyone please take care of your health! Now, I am a sophomore in college. Because of the distance, we still have to study online. However, each lesson is very funny and useful, always giving me positive energy. I also changed my mind about how to study effectively, get up earlier, read more books. I have gradually adapted to life away from home, knowing how to set goals to complete the day’s work. Furthermore, I have plans for next school year. I’m participate in the charity club. In particular, I will acquire knowledge and skills to find new opportunities. I want to create an online sales channel with you. It’s been a lot of fun, but it’d be even more fun if you were here. I’m looking forward to seeing you once I get home. Please write back when you get this. I'd love to hear all about how everything is going. With love, Huyen
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I received your letter last week,
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but
I was too busy studying,
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so
I couldn't reply right away. How's it going? I hope all’s well with you.
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So
it's been 3 months since the pandemic returned, and I can't go home. I am
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so
homesick and miss you
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so
much. Is the epidemic situation at home under control? What do
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people
do in the field this season? Everyone
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please
take care of your health!

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Now
, I am a sophomore in college.
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Because
of the distance, we
still
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have to
study online.
However
, each lesson is
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very
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funny
and useful, always giving me
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positive
energy. I
also
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changed
my mind about how to study
effectively
,
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get
up earlier, read more books. I have
gradually
adapted to life away from home, knowing how to set goals to complete the day’s work.

Furthermore
, I have plans for
next
school year. I’m
Consider using a past participle here: "participated".
participate
in the charity club.
In particular
, I will acquire knowledge and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to find new opportunities. I want to create an online sales channel with you. It’s been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
fun,
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but
it’d be even more fun if you were here. I’m looking forward to seeing you once I
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get
home.
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Please
write back when you
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get
this. I'd
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love
to hear all about how everything is going.

With
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love
,

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Huyen
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IELTS letter writing an email to a friend

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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