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You are going to travel to London for about one week and spend two days visiting the London Library. You are studying for a project and want to do some background studies. Write a letter to the head of the library. In your letter explain what your project is about, say what studies you want to do at the library say what facilities you need to use.

You are going to travel to London for about one week and spend two days visiting the London Library. You are studying for a project and want to do some background studies. Write a letter to the head of the library. In your letter explain what your project is about, say what studies you want to do at the library say what facilities you need to use. kWd0e
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about my intention to use your library and a number of its facilities for a research project. My name is James Bridget, a Nigerian, and at present, I am doing an investigation into the United Kingdom particular in the second world war. I understand that you have materials relating to that in your archives, therefore, I would like grateful if it is admissible for me to use them. I would be visiting London at the end of March for one week, and I would life to spend two days at your facility. Consequently, I would appreciate it if you could tell me when it is more convenient for me to come. While at the centre, I may need to use the scanner, photocopying machines, computer and internet services for retrieval and storage of vital information. I hope you would give me request due consideration, I look forward to receiving your response on this at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, James Bridget.
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about my intention to
use
your library and a number of its facilities for a research project.

My name is James Bridget, a Nigerian, and at present, I am doing an investigation into the United Kingdom particular in the second world war.

I understand that you have materials relating to that in your archives,
therefore
, I would like grateful if it is admissible for me to
use
them. I would be visiting London at the
end
of March for one week, and I
would life
to spend two days at your facility.
Consequently
, I would appreciate it if you could
tell
me when it is more convenient for me to
come
.

While at the
centre
, I may need to
use
the scanner, photocopying machines, computer and internet services for retrieval and storage of vital information.

I hope you would give me request due consideration, I look forward to receiving your response on this at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

James Bridget.
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IELTS letter You are going to travel to London for about one week and spend two days visiting the London Library. You are studying for a project and want to do some background studies. Write a letter to the head of the library. In your letter explain what your project is about, say what studies you want to do at the library say what facilities you need to use.

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