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To thank to Mrs for helping me to bring to hospital.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to extend my sincere thank to Mrs. Shahzoda, the nurses of your work. I am a injection and every day I take bus Route 133 to work. Last Friday morning when the bus almost reached the stop where I was to get off, I suddenly felt dizzy and then I lost my consciousness. When I came to, I found myself in Mary's. Hospital, attended by my friend. The doctor told me it was Mrs. Shahzoda who had sent me to the hospital and informed my friend of my condition. Mrs. Shahzoda happened to be on the same bus, but I have never met him. My friend and I were very much grateful to Mrs. Shahzoda for his kindness. Please forward my heartfelt thankfulness to him. We feel very much proud of your work for having such a good employee. If Mrs. Shahzoda was late for work that day, I'd like to compensate you. I do hope that your work would reward Mrs. Shahzoda for his noble deeds. Yours faithfully, Miss Angela
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to extend my sincere thank to
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Shahzoda
, the nurses of your work.

I am
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injection and every day I take bus Route 133 to
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. Last Friday morning when the bus almost reached the
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stop
where I was to
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off, I
suddenly
felt dizzy and then I lost my consciousness. When I came to, I found myself in Mary's. Hospital, attended by my friend. The doctor
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told
me it was
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Mrs
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Shahzoda
who had
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sent
me to the hospital and informed my friend of my condition.
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happened to be on the same bus,
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I have never met him.

My friend and I were
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very
much grateful to
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Mrs
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Shahzoda
for his kindness.
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forward my heartfelt thankfulness to him. We feel
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very
much proud of your
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work
for having such a
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good
employee. If
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Mrs
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Shahzoda
was late for
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that day, I'd like to compensate you.

I do hope that your
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would reward
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Shahzoda
for his noble deeds.

Yours
faithfully
,

Miss Angela

IELTS letter To thank to Mrs for helping me to bring to hospital.

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