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Thank you for me help healthing

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to extend my sincere thank to Mrs. Shahzoda, the nurses of your work. I am a injection and every day I take bus Route 133 to work. Last Friday morning when the bus almost reached the stop where I was to get off, I suddenly felt dizzy and then I lost my consciousness. When I came to, I found myself in Mary's. Hospital, attended by my friend. The doctor told me it was Mrs. Shahzoda who had sent me to the hospital and informed my friend of my condition. Mrs. Shahzoda happened to be on the same bus, but I have never met him. My friend and I were very much grateful to Mrs. Shahzoda for his kindness. Please forward my heartfelt thankfulness to him. We feel very much proud of your work for having such a good employee. If Mrs. Shahzoda was late for work that day, I'd like to compensate you. I do hope that your work would reward Mrs. Shahzoda for his noble deeds. Yours faithfully, Miss Angela
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to extend my sincere thank to
Mrs
.
Shahzoda
, the nurses of your work.

I am
a
injection and every day I take bus Route 133 to
work
. Last Friday morning when the bus almost reached the
stop
where I was to
get
off, I
suddenly
felt dizzy and then I lost my consciousness. When I came to, I found myself in Mary's. Hospital, attended by my friend. The doctor
told
me it was
Mrs
.
Shahzoda
who had
sent
me to the hospital and informed my friend of my condition.
Mrs
.
Shahzoda
happened to be on the same bus,
but
I have never met him.

My friend and I were
very
much grateful to
Mrs
.
Shahzoda
for his kindness.
Please
forward my heartfelt thankfulness to him. We feel
very
much proud of your
work
for having such a
good
employee. If
Mrs
.
Shahzoda
was late for
work
that day, I'd like to compensate you.

I do hope that your
work
would reward
Mrs
.
Shahzoda
for his noble deeds.

Yours
faithfully
,

Miss Angela
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IELTS letter Thank you for me help healthing

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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