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Writing a letter for your friend Yw9kV
I am writing to you request some more traning as I have just become a project leader. I believe that it is important to attend at a time management course so that I can work as more efficiently. Another area in where I need to develop my skills is delegation. I need this because of I did not gain enough experience last year. It would be all very helpful if I could do that course next month. I would also like to attend the time management course in two weeks' time, if it possible.
I am writing to you request
some
more
traning
as I have
just
become a project leader. I believe that it is
important
to attend at a time management course
so
that I can work as more
efficiently
. Another area in where I need to develop my
skills
is delegation. I need this
because of I
did not gain
enough
experience last year. It would be all
very
helpful if I could do that course
next
month. I would
also
like to attend the time management course in two weeks' time, if
it
possible.
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IELTS letter Writing a letter for your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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