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One of your friend looking for better job because ha has propblem in his job need some support and help

One of your friend looking for better job because ha has propblem in his job need some support and help Xq9Gw
Dear smith, I am so sorry. I have not written for so long my work keeps me occupied. I hope you doing well. I am writing this letter to do me a favor I need some support and help. I have been working as an English teacher since 2018. I would like to tell you that I am not feeling happy in my currently job. As you know annoying colleague is common problem at work. In addition to my boss who used to find any mistake with everything I did. Moreover, my salary is quite low. I would really appreciate that if you could help me regarding my situation and ask the HR manager at your school if they have vacancy job which fit my qualification and my experience. I am looking for better job Please contact me anytime don’t hesitate. Friend in need friend indeed. Look forward to hearing from you Best regards Mohammed
Dear smith,

I am
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so
sorry. I have not written for
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so
long my work
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keeps
me occupied.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope
Did you mean "you're doing", "you are doing", or "you were doing"?
you doing
well.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to do me a favor I need
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some
support and
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help
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been working as an English teacher since 2018.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to
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tell
you that I am not feeling happy in my
currently
job.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know annoying colleague is common problem at work.
In addition
to my boss who
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used
to find any mistake with everything I did.
Moreover
, my salary is quite low.

I would
really
appreciate that if you could
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help
me
The verb 'if' is used with an infinitive: "to regard" or "regard".
regarding
my situation and ask the HR manager at your school if they have vacancy job which fit my qualification and my experience. I am looking for better
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job


This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
contact me anytime don’t hesitate. Friend in need friend
indeed
.

Look forward to hearing from you

Best regards

Mohammed
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IELTS letter One of your friend looking for better job because ha has propblem in his job need some support and help

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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