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Letter for an English friend.

Letter for an English friend. lL2dD

Hi Daisy, I am very happy to receive your letter. I have reached home, but like you I find it quite difficult to start work again. I really love the photo we took in HaLong Bay. A lot of my colleagues asked about it when I posted on Facebook. I very much miss the time when you and I went to visit here. It left a lot of memories in my mind. This is really a meaningful tour for me. I hope that you feel the same way. But the funny thing is that I forgot my airline tickets to Hanoi at the reception desk. When I arrived at the airport, the hotel staff called me to inform me that I had left it. And it took a while to get it, fortunately I wasn't late for my flight. If you want to travel in spring we can go to Da Lat. At this time, the weather and scenery of Da Lat are very wonderful. A great place to take lots of beautiful photos. Talk to me about the next trip in your letter. I look forward to receiving your letter. See you,

Hi Daisy,

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start
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“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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beautiful
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Talk to me about the next
 trip in your letter.

I look forward to receiving your letter.

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