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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party Ajjn3
Dear Smith, Hope you and your family are doing well! I am writing to invite you to a dinner get together at my place and I am planning to cook Manchurian with gravy, which I had at your birthday celebration in your home. The occasion would be in favour of my graduation completion. My family and I decided to arrange a night meal at our paradise with a few college friends and relatives. Looking at, the menu of the dinner has finalized with the special dish I will cook that I enjoyed at your place. Therefore, I will be grateful if you could share the recipe of Manchurian with me including the list of ingredients. Finally, having said that it is an invitation to you, please come on Sunday evening on 25th July. I hope to see you there. please try to make it. Best wishes,
Dear Smith,

Hope you and your family are doing well! I am writing to invite you to a dinner
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get
together at my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
place and
I am planning to cook Manchurian with gravy, which I had at your birthday celebration in your home.

The occasion would be in
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of my graduation completion. My family and I decided to arrange a night meal at our paradise with a few college friends and relatives.

Looking at, the menu of the dinner has finalized with the special dish I will cook that I enjoyed at your place.
Therefore
, I will be grateful if you could share the recipe of Manchurian with me including the list of ingredients.

Finally
, having said that it is an invitation to you,
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
on Sunday evening on 25th July. I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you there.
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please
try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it.

Best wishes,

IELTS letter You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

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