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You are working for a company. You need to take some time offwork and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • Explain why you want to take time offwork • Give details of the amount of time you need • Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

You are working for a company. You need to take some time offwork and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • Explain why you want to take time offwork • Give details of the amount of time you need • Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away. PVVPJ
Dear Mr. Masood, I am writing this letter to ask permission to take one week paid leave in next month starting from 12th May, 2021 to prepare for my MBA final examination. And I am hoping you would permit me to take leave. As you know, along with job I am doing correspondence MBA from NMIMS. The final semester examination will be held on the second week of May. Hence, to concentrate fully on the exam preparation I am planning to use my paid leave. However, I would available on phone for any emergencies, perhaps attend any significant mails during my interim. Furthermore, Natasha has agreed to take care of my tasks in absence of me. Also, I would be ready to work on weekends or extra hours on weekdays to finish any pending tasks. It would be highly appreciated if you could grand me paid holidays from 12th May, 2021 to 16th May, 2021. Thanks for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hear from you. Your Faithfully, Anju Shanil
Dear Mr.
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Masood
,

I am writing this letter to ask permission to take one week paid
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leave
in
next
month starting from 12th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "May 2021".
May, 2021
to prepare for my MBA final examination. And I am hoping you would permit me to take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
.

As you know, along with job I am doing correspondence MBA from
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NMIMS
. The final semester examination will
be held
on the second week of May.
Hence
, to concentrate
fully
on the exam preparation I am planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my paid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
.
However
, I
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would available
on phone for any emergencies, perhaps attend any significant mails during my interim.
Furthermore
, Natasha has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to take care of my tasks in absence of me.
Also
, I would be ready to work on weekends or extra hours on weekdays to finish any pending tasks.

It would be
highly
appreciated if you
The word 'grand' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
could grand
me paid holidays from 12th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "May 2021".
May, 2021
to 16th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "May 2021".
May, 2021
.

Thanks for your time and consideration. Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Faithfully
,

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Anju
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Shanil
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time offwork and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • Explain why you want to take time offwork • Give details of the amount of time you need • Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

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170 words
5.5
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