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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. I your letter describe the situation, explain why you cannot continue at this time and say what action you would like to take.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. I your letter describe the situation, explain why you cannot continue at this time and say what action you would like to take. r8832
Respected Reena Ma"am, I Chetna Pandey, is doing a full time job, and also doing a part time evening course class in cooking. My full time job is of eight hours per day from Monday to Saturday. I get so much tired because of my full time job that no energy is left in my body to continue with evening cooking course class which is of two hours daily. As I live alone I have to do all the work by myself. From cooking of breakfast for myself, then going to do job for eight hours, when I come back home in the evening I am totally exhausted. I am writing this letter to apologise to you that I will not be able to continue with evening cooking class. I hope you can understand why I am unable to continue with te evening course class. As I am extremely sorry for it. But I ensure that whenever in future I get time I will continue with the evening cooking class. Thanking you, Chetna Tiwari
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Chetna
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Pandey
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time
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evening course
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class
in cooking. My full
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time
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job
is of eight hours per day from Monday to Saturday. I
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get
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so
much tired
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because
of my full
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time
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job
that no energy is
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left
in my body to
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continue
with evening cooking course
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class
which is of two hours daily.
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live
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have to
do all the work by myself. From cooking of breakfast for myself, then going to do
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job
for eight hours, when I
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come
back home in the evening I am
totally
exhausted. I am writing this letter to
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apologise
to you that I will not be able to
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continue
with evening cooking
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class
. I hope you can understand why I am unable to
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continue
with
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te
evening course
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class
. As I am
extremely
sorry for it.
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But
I ensure that whenever in future I
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get
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time
I will
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continue
with the evening cooking
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class
. Thanking you,
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Chetna
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Tiwari

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. I your letter describe the situation, explain why you cannot continue at this time and say what action you would like to take.

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