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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. g55m7
DEAR MR. RAHAT THANK YOU FOR INQUIRING ABOUT MY TRAUMA SITUATION. I AM X, A PERMANENT RESIDENT OF KALABAGAN ROAD, DHAKA DISTRICT. I AM A PERMANENT EMPLOYEE OF AXIS BANK. I WAS INFORMED FROM RECEPTION ON YESTERDAY REGARDING YOUR INQUIRY ABOUT MY TRAUMA HAPPENED FROM AN ACCIDENT IN JANUARY-2021. I AM REALLY GLAD THAT YOU LOOKED AFTER ME AFTER THAT ACCIDENT, YOU TOOK ME TO HOSPITAL AND INFORMED MY FAMILY. ONLY GOD KNOWS WHAT MIGHT HAVE HAPPENED IF YOU WERE NOT THERE. I AM REALLY SORRY THAT I HAVE NOT BEEN IN TOUCH WITH YOU AFTER RELEASED FROM HOSPITAL. I WILL BE REALLY GRATEFUL IF YOU MANAGE SOME TIME AND VISIT ME WITH YOUR FAMILY. I HOPE SPENDING A WEEKEND WITH YOUR FAMILY WILL MAKE ME REALLY HAPPY. HERE IS MY CELL PHONE NO-XXXXXXXX. PLEASE DO CONTACT ME BEFORE ARRIVING. I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU. BEST WISHES.
DEAR MR.
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RAHAT


THANK YOU FOR INQUIRING ABOUT MY TRAUMA SITUATION.

I AM X, A PERMANENT RESIDENT OF
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KALABAGAN
ROAD, DHAKA DISTRICT. I AM A PERMANENT EMPLOYEE OF AXIS BANK.
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I
WAS INFORMED
FROM RECEPTION ON YESTERDAY REGARDING YOUR INQUIRY ABOUT MY TRAUMA HAPPENED FROM AN ACCIDENT IN JANUARY-2021.

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I
AM
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REALLY
GLAD THAT YOU LOOKED AFTER ME AFTER THAT ACCIDENT, YOU TOOK ME TO HOSPITAL AND INFORMED MY FAMILY.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ONLY
GOD KNOWS WHAT MIGHT HAVE HAPPENED IF YOU WERE NOT THERE. I AM
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
REALLY
SORRY THAT I HAVE NOT BEEN IN TOUCH WITH YOU AFTER RELEASED FROM HOSPITAL.

I WILL BE
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REALLY
GRATEFUL IF YOU MANAGE
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
SOME
TIME AND VISIT ME WITH YOUR FAMILY.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
HOPE SPENDING A WEEKEND WITH YOUR FAMILY WILL
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
MAKE
ME
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REALLY
HAPPY. HERE IS MY CELL PHONE
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NO-XXXXXXXX
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
PLEASE
DO CONTACT ME
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
BEFORE
ARRIVING.

I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.

BEST WISHES.
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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