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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food 155rn
DEAR X IT WAS GREAT TO GET YOUR LETTER. I SPENT WONDERFUL TIME WHEN YOU WERE IN BANGLADESH. THANK YOU FOR INVITING ME TO VISIT YOUR COUNTRY. I HAVE NEVER BEEN TO THE UK. I NEED SOME ADVISE ABOUT A GIFT MY MOTHER WOULD LIKE TO GET FOR YOUR FAMILY. DO YOU HAVE ANY PREFERENCES? PLEASE DO TELL ME. WHAT KIND OF ACTIVITIES WE MAY HAVE TOGETHER DURING MY VISIT? I WILL BE GLAD IF YOU INFORM ME SIGHT SEEING SITES. FURTHERMORE, I AM COMING THERE IN NOVEMBER, WILL IT WINTER SEASON IN THAT TIME. SUGGEST ME CLOTHING OPTIONS IN YOUR COUNTRY DURING NOVEMBER MONTH. LAST OF ALL, MY FAVOURITE PART, FOOD. INFORM ME DETAILS OF CUSINES THAT I MAY EXPERIENCE DURING MY VISIT. I'LL FINISH NOW AS I AM RUNNING OUT OF SPACE. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON.
DEAR X

IT WAS GREAT TO
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GET
YOUR LETTER.

I SPENT WONDERFUL TIME WHEN YOU WERE IN BANGLADESH. THANK YOU FOR INVITING ME TO VISIT YOUR COUNTRY. I HAVE NEVER BEEN TO THE UK. I NEED
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SOME
Did you mean "advice" (noun)?
ADVISE
ABOUT A GIFT MY MOTHER WOULD LIKE TO
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GET
FOR YOUR FAMILY. DO YOU HAVE ANY PREFERENCES?
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PLEASE
DO
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TELL
ME.

WHAT KIND OF ACTIVITIES WE MAY HAVE TOGETHER DURING MY VISIT? I WILL BE GLAD IF YOU INFORM ME SIGHT SEEING SITES.
FURTHERMORE
, I AM COMING THERE IN NOVEMBER, WILL IT WINTER SEASON IN THAT TIME. SUGGEST ME CLOTHING OPTIONS IN YOUR COUNTRY DURING NOVEMBER MONTH.

LAST OF ALL, MY
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FAVOURITE
PART, FOOD. INFORM ME
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DETAILS
OF
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CUSINES
THAT I MAY EXPERIENCE DURING MY VISIT.

I'LL FINISH
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NOW
AS I AM RUNNING OUT OF SPACE.

HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU
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SOON
.

IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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