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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to describe my experience being trained at your institute and the problems I have experienced during my learning experience. Firstly, I would like to introduce myself, My name is John, and I have recently completed my CCNP course from your esteemed institute. The CCNP course in which I got enrolled is an extension to the associate level course CCNA. The course was planned for a duration of 25 days providing extensive knowledge in network routing and switching concepts. The labs were equipped with the state of art networking appliances with blazing speed broadband made learning exciting. I had been working as a Level 1 network support engineer past 5 years handling only the troubleshooting tasks. This course will not only increase my knowledge and skillset but will also strengthen my confidence to switch the job profile to that of a Level 2 network support engineer where I will be part of the implementation team. Most importantly, I must thank the institute for the additional 2 days of training we received in network security, this gave us the glimpse and the necessity to learn about network security. Additionally, I would like to provide some valuable suggestions which would attract more students to your institute. Increasing the air condition units in the practical lab is the need of an hour. I am afraid if all the students begin to attend the lab together current 5 air conditioning units may not be able to maintain temperature. Moreover, there is also a probability that the equipment may get damaged. Hope my feedback will make a difference in running your business, Thank you once again. Best Regards,

Dear Sir,

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Best Regards, 