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You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend

You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend JPla

Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am Ria, Jamies's cousin. I am sure he would have introduced me to you at some point. He told me that one of his friends lives in Paris. For a long time, I was planning to go on a vacation but could not make it happen for various reasons. I want to have a world tour before starting my new job, and Paris is on the top of my bucket list. Jamie suggested I write to you since you live here. I am excited about my vacation as I have never been to Paris. I hope you would give me some suggestions regarding my stay there. I want to stay in a youth hostel or a similar place. Also, If you can give me advice on the necessary arrangements that I need to make to visit tourist places beforehand. Moreover, I want to do a video shoot near the Eiffel tower. . Would it require any extra permission? This is another one of my big dreams! I look forward to hearing from you and hope we can meet in person when I am in Paris. Best wishes, Rhea Doe

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