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Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter ● Describe your colleague’s job at the company ● Describe a time you worked with this Person ● Explain why you believe this person deserves the award

Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter ● Describe your colleague’s job at the company ● Describe a time you worked with this Person ● Explain why you believe this person deserves the award 36An

Dear Ms. Jackson, I am writing you to suggest that my colleague, Corina Miller, is very deserving of the Employee of the Year award this year. As you know, Corina is on our customer help team. She assists our customers when they have questions or problems with our products. She’s either on the phone or on our internet chat board all day, every day, making sure our customers are happy. A few months ago, I had my first direct experience collaborating with Corina. A customer called her with a technical problem, and Corina asked for my assistance to address the matter. Corina and I worked together on the issue until we found the solution. The customer was very satisfied to receive such thorough assistance from Corina. He even commented that it was this level of service that will bring him back to our company as a customer in the future. Since this initial experience, I have had several opportunities to work with Corina on customer support issues. She stands out to me because I recognize how much care and concern she puts into each inquiry. It’s clear her commitment to service has a profound impact on our customers. I hope you will consider Corina for this year’s award! Sincerely, Bob

Dear Ms. Jackson,

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As you know, Corina is on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
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help
 team. She assists our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 when they have questions or problems with our products. She’s either on the phone or on our internet chat board all day, every day, making sure our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 are happy.

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 direct experience collaborating with Corina. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 called her with a technical problem, and Corina This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitedrequested
asked for
 my assistance to address the matter. Corina and I worked together on the issue until we found the solution. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
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company
 as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
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 in the future.

Since this initial experience, I have had several opportunities to work with Corina on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 support issues. She stands out to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 her commitment to service has a profound impact on our customers.

I hope you will consider Corina for this year’s award!

Sincerely
,

Bob