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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take rNLJ
Dear Sir / Mam, I am writing to let you know that I Intaf and my family have move to Canada last month and are renting in your apartment, all other facilities available with this apartment is absolutely perfect, apart from some furniture which are terribly uncomfortable to sit upon. Let me explain the situation in more details. Few of the furniture are so much damaged that it cannot be used anymore and some of it are so nosey and feel so awkward when used, especially the one in the bedroom, which might broke down at any moment and can even cause damage to my family. it is too dangerous to have things like this in the apartment. Would you kindly do me a favor, and replace this furniture with good one, and if that is not possible than please remove this as I would be much happy to live without any furniture Thank you for your consideration Your faithfully intaf
Dear Sir / Mam,

I am writing to
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let
you know that I
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Intaf
and my family have
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move
to Canada last month and are renting in your apartment, all other facilities available with this apartment is
absolutely
perfect, apart from
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some
furniture which are
terribly
uncomfortable to sit upon.

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Let
me
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explain
the situation in more
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details
. Few of the furniture are
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so
much damaged that it cannot be
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used
anymore and
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some
of it are
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so
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nosey
and feel
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so
awkward when
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used
,
especially
the one in the bedroom, which might broke down at any moment and can even cause damage to my family.
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it
is too
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dangerous
to have things like this in the apartment.

Would you kindly do me a favor, and replace this furniture with
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good
one, and if
that is
not
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possible
than
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please
remove this as I would be much happy to
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live
without any furniture

Thank you for your consideration

Your
faithfully


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intaf

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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