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You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday. Write an email to Douglas. In your email, you should: • Arrange to meet Douglas next Saturday • Suggest something you could do together • Say how long you will be able to spend with him.

You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday. Write an email to Douglas. In your email, you should: • Arrange to meet Douglas next Saturday • Suggest something you could do together • Say how long you will be able to spend with him. Kn7Kk
Hi Douglas, It’s great to hear from you. How is it going? Do you have any plans at weekend? I’m going to meet you next Saturday and visit your country. Long time no see and I miss you so much. What do you think about that? Why don’t we hang out together at night? It’s so interesting and I also want to know about your culture and traditions of Scotland. What about visiting some beautiful places and eating specialties? I’m looking forward to enjoy the delicious food at that time. I think I will spend one week for you to do everything in Scotland next Saturday. I hope you write back soon. Best wishes, Xuyen.
Hi Douglas,

It’s great to hear from you. How is it going? Do you have any plans at weekend? I’m going to
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meet
you
next
Saturday and visit your country. Long time no
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see
and I miss you
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so
much. What do you
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think
about that?

Why don’t we hang
Did you mean "our"?
out
together at night? It’s
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so
interesting and I
also
want to know about your culture and traditions of Scotland. What about visiting
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some
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beautiful
places and eating specialties? I’m looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to enjoying".
to enjoy
the delicious food at that time. I
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think
I will spend one week for you to do everything in Scotland
next
Saturday.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you write back
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soon
.

Best wishes,

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Xuyen
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IELTS letter You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday. Write an email to Douglas. In your email, you should: • Arrange to meet Douglas next Saturday • Suggest something you could do together • Say how long you will be able to spend with him.

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