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You are studying part-time at a university and have the opportunity for additional work experience but do not have enough time for all your classes. You want to postpone an optional class until the next semester. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter - Say why you want to want to do - Say why you are postponing the class - Say what you intend to do to make up the missed classes

You are studying part-time at a university and have the opportunity for additional work experience but do not have enough time for all your classes. You want to postpone an optional class until the next semester. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter - Say why you want to want to do - Say why you are postponing the class - Say what you intend to do to make up the missed classes D6K07
Dear Professor Dave, I am writing this letter to request you about rescheduling of an optional class to the next semester. As you are aware, I had selected the subject “Sociology” as an optional subject to enhance my knowledge on behaviors of people towards social issues. Last week, I have received the most awaited reply from Reliance Industry! They have given me the opportunity to do an internship. This will improve the practical knowledge and experience in my field of study. Also, it may extent to summer holiday. As the long distance between company and university, I have to move near the company. I have already make an arrangement with my friend, who will be attaining sociology class, to share the notes with me. So, I will be convenient for next semester to reduce the study stress. Hoping for your support and understanding towards the situation. I will be waiting for you reply. Yours sincerely, Ruchi Patel
Dear Professor Dave,

I am writing this letter to request you about rescheduling of an optional
class
to the
next
semester. As you are aware, I had selected the subject “Sociology” as an optional subject to enhance my knowledge on behaviors of
people
towards social issues.

Last week, I have received the most awaited reply from Reliance Industry! They have
given
me the opportunity to do an internship. This will
improve
the practical knowledge and experience in my field of study.
Also
, it
may extent
to summer holiday. As the long distance between
company
and university, I
have to
move
near the
company
.

I have already
make
an arrangement with my friend, who will be attaining sociology
class
, to share the notes with me.
So
, I will be convenient for
next
semester to
reduce
the study
stress
. Hoping for your support and understanding towards the situation.

I will be waiting for you reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ruchi
Patel
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IELTS letter You are studying part-time at a university and have the opportunity for additional work experience but do not have enough time for all your classes. You want to postpone an optional class until the next semester. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter - Say why you want to want to do - Say why you are postponing the class - Say what you intend to do to make up the missed classes

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