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You Work For An International Company And Would Like To Work In Its Head Office

You Work For An International Company And Would Like To Work In Its Head Office eepJV

Dear Mr Peter, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my interest to work for a week at our headquarter in Hong Kong. As you may remembered, our factory distribution system is not working properly. It starts and stops intermittently. Therefore, our store received many customer negative feedback. So, I would like to have a face-to-face discussion with the head office technician to find out the problem in order to solve the problem. I have talked to my colleague Mr David, and he will take over all of my responsibilities during my absence. In addition, I will check my email daily and have a Zoom online meeting with my team member to ensure the work not behind schedule. I would very much appreciate it if you could approve my request. Thank you for your support and understanding. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sam Luke

Dear Mr Peter,

I hope this letter finds you well.

I am writing this letter to express my interest to work for a week at our The word 'headquarter' is a verb. The noun to describe a corporate head office ends with an 's'.headquarters
headquarter
 in Hong Kong. As you may The verb 'may' requires the base form of the verb: "remember"remember
remembered
, our factory distribution system is not working properly
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
intermittently
. Therefore
, our store received This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 customer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 feedback. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I would like to have a face-to-face discussion with the head office technician to find out the problem in order to solve the problem.

I have talked to my colleague Mr David, and he will take over all of my responsibilities during my absence. In addition
, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my email daily and have a Zoom online meeting with my team member to ensure the work not behind schedule.

I would This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much appreciate it if you could approve my request.

Thank you for your support and understanding.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

Sam Luke