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My friend come to Uzbekistan.

My friend come to Uzbekistan. ElyND
Dear my friend. How are you? I hope you're fine and how's your life? I have been really busy recently sorry it's taken me so long to write back and i do hope this letter will find you in good health and spirits. I'm going to write you that i've got good news. I'm really glad to read that come to Uzbekistan. If you come here i with you to go to wonderful place. For example nowadays our country a lot of buildings are built. For example the highest houses and different education centre. If you come i promise i to will see different markets. Oh, another thing i wanted to mention i promise to you when you come i will show a traditional coisine. Do you want to eat my traditional meals if you want go drift to your country i promise to take of care of yourself. Hope to see from you soon. Your friend (Doniyor)
Dear my friend. How are you? I hope you're fine and how's your life? I have been
really
busy recently sorry it's taken me
so
long to write back and
i
do hope this letter will find you in
good
health and spirits.
I
'm going to write you that
i've
got
good
news.
I
'm
really
glad to read that
come
to Uzbekistan.
If
you
come
here i with you to go to wonderful place.
For example
nowadays our country
a lot of
buildings
are built
.
For example
the highest
houses
and
different
education
centre
.
If
you
come
i
promise i to will
see
different
markets. Oh, another thing
i
wanted to mention
i
promise to you when you
come
i
will
show
a traditional
coisine
. Do you want to eat my traditional meals if you want go drift to your country
i
promise to take of care of yourself. Hope to
see
from you
soon
. Your friend (
Doniyor
)
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IELTS letter My friend come to Uzbekistan.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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