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letter to freind about new job

letter to freind about new job PgAWd
Dear Malta, Hope your are doing well! I am writing this letter to share the new changes that happened in my life. I recently switched my job. As you are aware that I was working with Genpact as an Assistant Manager. Genpact shifted their offices from Noida to Gurgaon. The new location is far my resident and I was not willing to shift to Gurgaon. Finally, I decided to quit my job, fortunately, I got a new job in Noida. In addition, I would like to share with you about my new job. The new job that I joined is with HCL a multinational company. Their office is quite near to my home. The work profile is similar with my previous profile. I have to look over the financials of the company and forecast the expenses. Lastly, I want to share with you that I recently brought a new pet at home. I know that you are fond of cats so I brought a kitten. I will email you some recent pictures of her. I am waiting for your reply, write me back. With love, Priya.
Dear Malta,

Hope your are doing well! I am writing this letter to share the
new
changes
that happened in my life.

I recently switched my
job
. As you are aware that I was working with
Genpact
as an Assistant Manager.
Genpact
shifted their offices from Noida to Gurgaon. The
new
location is far my
resident and
I was not willing to shift to Gurgaon.
Finally
, I decided to quit my
job
,
fortunately
, I
got
a
new
job
in Noida.

In addition
, I would like to share with you about my
new
job
. The
new
job
that I
joined
is with HCL a multinational
company
. Their office is quite near to my home. The work profile is similar with my previous profile. I
have to
look over the financials of the
company
and forecast the expenses.

Lastly
, I want to share with you that I recently brought a
new
pet at home. I know that you are fond of cats
so
I brought a kitten. I will email you
some
recent pictures of her.

I
am waiting for your reply, write me back.

With
love
,

Priya.
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IELTS letter letter to freind about new job

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  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
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