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Write a letter to your hostel manager to change your room.

Write a letter to your hostel manager to change your room. eeqP7

I am writing to let you know that I am extremely uneasy with my current living climate. While the accommodation itself is quite satisfactory, my roommate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work, I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation, problem started three months ago when my roommate introductory moved in. Before that, everything was corporative when I was living with an old roommate. My current roommate doesn't only stay awake all night but he plays consistently loud music. as I am not being able to sleep properly and therefore, I am not concentrating on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my roommate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone quieter and more considerate of others. I don't mind the type of accommodation as long as it's quiet. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jack

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Would you kindly transfer me or my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatefriend
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 to another room? I would much prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with someone quieter and more considerate of others. I don't mind the type of accommodation as long as it's quiet.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
,

Jack