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Write a letter to your hostel manager to change your room.

Write a letter to your hostel manager to change your room. eeqP7
I am writing to let you know that I am extremely uneasy with my current living climate. While the accommodation itself is quite satisfactory, my roommate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work, I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation, problem started three months ago when my roommate introductory moved in. Before that, everything was corporative when I was living with an old roommate. My current roommate doesn't only stay awake all night but he plays consistently loud music. as I am not being able to sleep properly and therefore, I am not concentrating on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my roommate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone quieter and more considerate of others. I don't mind the type of accommodation as long as it's quiet. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jack
I am writing to
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let
you know that I am
extremely
uneasy with my
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current
living climate. While the accommodation itself is quite satisfactory, my
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roommate
has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work, I hope you will consider my situation
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favourably
.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation, problem
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started
three months ago when my
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roommate
introductory
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moved
in.
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Before
that, everything was
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corporative
when I was living with an
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old
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roommate
. My
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current
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roommate
doesn't
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only
stay awake all night
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he plays

consistently
loud music.
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as
I am not being able to sleep
properly
and
therefore
, I am not concentrating on my studies.

Would you kindly transfer me or my
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to another room? I would much prefer to
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live
with someone quieter and more considerate of others. I don't mind the type of accommodation as long as it's quiet.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jack

IELTS letter Write a letter to your hostel manager to change your room.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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