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This is part of a letter you receive from a pen-friend. “You’re keen on cooking, aren’t you? What meals do you like to cook? Where do you buy all your food from?” Now write a letter, answering your friend’s questions. Write your letter in about 100 words on your answer sheet.

This is part of a letter you receive from a pen-friend. “You’re keen on cooking, aren’t you? What meals do you like to cook? Where do you buy all your food from? ” Now write a letter, answering your friend’s questions. Write your letter in about 100 words on your answer sheet. QVY33
Dear my friend, I’m glad to receive your letter. How are you? Do you have any plans in the near future? Of course, I’m a big fan of cooking for my family. Why do you know about that? I’m so surprised to hear that. Cooking breakfast is my cup of tea because I want to take care of my home and cook delicious meals for them. I always change the style of cooking and foods like Vietnam foods, Japan foods, Korea foods, etc. Bringing fantastic meals is my big dream. Especially, it looks like happy and delighted when we enjoy the food I cook together around the table. Because of the health of my family, I usually buy all food such as meat, beef, vegetable, fish, scrimp, etc from groceries and shops which provide fresh and clean food. It’s good for our health although the price is more expensive than the other food. What do you think about that? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. See you soon, Xuyen.
Dear my friend,

I’m glad to receive your letter. How are you? Do you have any plans in the near future?
Of course
, I’m a
big
fan of cooking for my family. Why do you know about that? I’m
so
surprised to hear that.

Cooking breakfast is my cup of tea
because
I want to take care of my home and cook delicious meals for them. I always
change
the style of cooking and
foods
like Vietnam
foods
, Japan
foods
, Korea
foods
, etc. Bringing fantastic meals is my
big
dream.
Especially
, it looks like happy and delighted when we enjoy the
food
I cook together around the table.

Because
of the health of my family, I
usually
buy
all
food
such as meat, beef, vegetable, fish, scrimp, etc from groceries and shops which provide fresh and clean
food
. It’s
good
for our health although the price is more expensive than the other
food
. What do you
think
about that?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

See
you
soon
,

Xuyen
.
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IELTS letter This is part of a letter you receive from a pen-friend. “You’re keen on cooking, aren’t you? What meals do you like to cook? Where do you buy all your food from? ” Now write a letter, answering your friend’s questions. Write your letter in about 100 words on your answer sheet.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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