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Dear Vimansa, Thank you very much for your letter. I’m very happy delighted to hear that you have decided to do your higher studies. Indeed, it is a very good an excellent choice that you have chosen to do the same course that I did at the University of Canada West. As you know, my course was a higher national diploma in banking and finance. It is a 1-year program with 6 months internship. It means we have to evaluate our knowledge by doing a job in a bank or finance institute. The University of Canada West is a well- reputed and world-ranked university. Then you don’t have any hesitation about its certification, and according to my experiences it is undoubtedly recommend this university based on my experience. It has a well- defined course structure and is related to the current market needs. Usually, they change it every two years. Also, the lecturers are really helpful and well qualified. So I can assure you that this is your best selection. Basically, there are two ways of applying for the course. The easiest way is online. Please keep in mind to scan all your certificates, such as birth certificate and educational certificates. You must check all the fields in the application before making any payments. If you need any clarification, please give me a call at any time. I am always willing to help you. I wish you all the best. With love, champika
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much for your letter. I’m
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happy delighted to hear that you have decided to do your higher studies.
Indeed
, it is a
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very
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an excellent choice that you have chosen to do the same
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course
that I did at the
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University
of Canada West.

As you know, my
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course
was a higher national diploma in banking and finance. It is a 1-year program with 6 months internship. It means we
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have to
evaluate our knowledge by doing a job in a bank or finance institute.

The
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University
of Canada West is a well- reputed and world-ranked
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university
. Then you don’t have any hesitation about its certification, and according to my experiences it is
undoubtedly
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recommend
this
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university
based on my experience. It has a well- defined
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course
structure and
is related
to the
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current
market needs.
Usually
, they
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change
it every two years.
Also
, the lecturers are
really
helpful and well qualified.
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So
I can assure you that this is your best selection.

Basically
, there are two ways of applying for the
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course
. The easiest way is online.
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Please
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keep
in mind to scan all your certificates, such as birth certificate and educational certificates. You
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must
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check
all the fields in the application
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before
making any payments.

If you need any clarification,
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please
give me a call at any time. I am always willing to
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help
you. I wish you all the best.

With
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love
,

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champika
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IELTS letter your friend has selected the same cause to follow in your university.

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8 paragraphs
242 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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