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You are going to have a one - week trip to MeKong delta to make a photo collection. Write a letter to your friend, inviting her to join this occasion

You are going to have a one - week trip to MeKong delta to make a photo collection. Write a letter to your friend, inviting her to join this occasion 30NYw
Dear Vy, How are you these days? I hope you are doing well in your work. I'd like to inform you that I am going to have a one-week trip to MeKong delta to make a photo collection. The trip will starts at 14. 00 on Sunday in my house. In the tri, there will be some activities. First, we will go to Hon Da Bac to make a photo collection. Next, we go to Can Tho city to visit the foating market at Ninh Kieu. Finally, we will visit a photo exhibition given by Jennie in her company. Would you like to have a one-week trip to MeKong delta to make a photo collection with me and my friends? I am looking forward to seeing you in the trip Best wishes,
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Vy
, How are you these days? I hope you are doing well in your work. I'd like to inform you that I am going to have a one-week
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trip
to
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MeKong
delta to
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make
a
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photo
collection. The
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trip
will
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starts
at 14. 00 on Sunday in my
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house
. In the
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tri
, there will be
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some
activities.
First
, we will go to Hon
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Da
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Bac
to
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make
a
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photo
collection.
Next
, we go to Can Tho city to visit the
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foating
market at
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Ninh
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Kieu
.
Finally
, we will visit a
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photo
exhibition
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given
by Jennie in her
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company
. Would you like to have a one-week
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trip
to
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MeKong
delta to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
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photo
collection with me and my friends? I am looking forward to seeing you in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
Best wishes,
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IELTS letter You are going to have a one - week trip to MeKong delta to make a photo collection. Write a letter to your friend, inviting her to join this occasion

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  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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