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Help in suppervising of research asking

Help in suppervising of research asking d3Mnr
Dear Cath, I hope this email finds you well. Excuse me, I have to send from this email. I think that Professor Guoping Liu will be a good mentor for fist stage of desining a cheap air quality network for conflict countries I am seeking to communicate with colleagues from SWU staff to cooperate in preparing research proposals on environmental pollution. As you know, in August, My team and I started studying soil pollution in northwest Syria with a grant from Cara. But to get a complete assessment of the environmental pollution resulting from the current war in Syria, it is necessary to study the quality of the three elements: soil, air, and water. I hope to find one or more SWU researchers who will be happy to help us study air and water pollution in the mentioned area. See attached file, please. With best wishes, Miassar
Dear
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Cath
,

I hope this email finds you well.

Excuse me, I
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have to
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send
from this email.

I
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think
that Professor
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Guoping
Liu will be a
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good
mentor for fist stage of
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desining
a
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cheap
air quality network for conflict countries

I am seeking to communicate with colleagues from
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SWU
staff to cooperate in preparing research proposals on environmental pollution.

As you know, in August, My team and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
studying soil pollution in northwest Syria with a grant from Cara.

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But
to
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get
a complete assessment of the environmental pollution resulting from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
war in Syria, it is necessary to study the quality of the three elements: soil, air, and water. I hope to find one or more
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SWU
researchers who will be happy to
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help
us study air and water pollution in the mentioned area.

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See
attached file,
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please
.

With best wishes,

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Miassar
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IELTS letter Help in suppervising of research asking

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  American English
10 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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