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Hello everyone. Thank you for giving me this wonderful opportunity to talk about myself. My name is Nguyen Thi Ha Duyen. I'm originally from Nam Dinh Province. It is a peaceful city which is famous for its delicious foods and beautiful sights. I'm 18 years old, and at the moment I am in the first year of university. My department is Banking and Finance at the Academy of Finance. My plan in the next three years is to study hard and have an IELTS Certificate in my fourth year. I am a student, and like the others, my daily activities are usually the same. Today, I am going to describe my usual day. As my main duty now is studying, my main activities on weekdays are going to school and doing my homework. I start my day by getting up around 6. 00 am but Sundays. Then I head to the bathroom to brush my teeth, get dressed, and do my morning skincare routine. And I usually drink a glass of lukewarm water right after waking up to help boost my metabolism. It takes me about 20 minutes to get ready. I then have a light breakfast at 6. 30 am and prepare to go to school. After that, I leave home and go to school at 6. 45 am. I usually go to school on foot, as my school is not that far. It takes 3-4 minutes to walk to school. I go together with my roommates, and often with some other friends too. When we get to school, we either chat about different things or go over our homework. My classes start at 6. 55 a. m. We have five periods per day, about 50 minutes each and we get 5-minute-breaks between periods. We then go home for lunch when classes finish at 11. 30 am. I have lunch with my roommates at noon. I usually have nothing to do after lunch, so I take a nap to prepare for a fresh and lively afternoon. After a nap, I do my homework and take a rest. I have dinner around 7. 00 p. m, take a shower and watch the news channel or surf the Internet. One of the most productive things I can do to start my day on the right foot should happen before I go to bed the previous day - make a plan. Because a day-to-day plan is a key to effective time management. I am usually in the habit of staying late at night too. This is my presentation. I'd like to know your opinion along with possible grammatical errors and other mistakes. Please help me out. Thank you for listening.
Hello everyone. Thank you for giving me this wonderful opportunity to talk about myself. My name is Nguyen
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Thi
Ha
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Duyen
. I'm
originally
from Nam
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Dinh
Province. It is a peaceful city which is
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famous
for its delicious foods and
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beautiful
sights. I'm 18 years
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old
, and at the moment I am in the
first
year of university. My department is Banking and Finance at the Academy of Finance. My plan in the
next
three years is to study
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hard
and have an IELTS Certificate in my fourth year.

I am a student, and like the others, my daily activities are
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usually
the same.
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Today
, I am going to
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describe
my usual day. As my main duty
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now
is studying, my main activities on weekdays are going to
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school
and doing my homework.

I
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start
my day by getting up around 6. 00 am
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but
Sundays. Then I head to the bathroom to brush my teeth,
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get
dressed, and do my morning skincare routine. And I
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usually
drink a glass of lukewarm water right after waking up to
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help
boost my metabolism. It takes me about 20 minutes to
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get
ready. I then have a light breakfast at 6. 30 am and prepare to go to
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school
. After that, I
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leave
home and go to
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school
at 6. 45 am.

I
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usually
go to
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school
on foot, as my
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school
is not that far. It takes 3-4 minutes to walk to
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school
. I go together with my roommates, and
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often
with
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some
other friends too. When we
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get
to
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school
, we either chat about
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different
things or go over our homework. My classes
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start
at 6. 55 a. m. We have five periods per day, about 50 minutes
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
each and
we
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get
5-minute-breaks between periods. We then go home for lunch when classes finish at 11. 30 am. I have lunch with my roommates at noon. I
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usually
have nothing to do after lunch,
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so
I take a nap to prepare for a fresh and lively afternoon. After a nap, I do my homework and take a rest. I have dinner around 7. 00 p. m, take a shower and
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watch
the news channel or surf the Internet.

One of the most productive things I can do to
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start
my day on the right foot should happen
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before
I go to bed the previous day
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-
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make
a plan.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
a day-to-day plan is a key to effective time management. I am
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usually
in the habit of staying late at night too.

This is my presentation. I'd like to know your opinion along with possible grammatical errors and other mistakes.
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Please
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me out. Thank you for listening.
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IELTS letter write about your daily life

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  American English
6 paragraphs
448 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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